Saturday, March 9, 2013

Mystic White




White words on white paper
Want to express a lot
But dont know the manner

The white engulfs another white
Leaving the white (paper) blank behind
Eventually I got keyed as callous.
But the white holds all the seven
And so do me as stoic and stirred
A diamond is needed to look
Through the plain light
Displaying vivid iridescent colours.


Hioy'oy Hoi Polloi
JJJ

29 comments:

  1. White words on white paper is as good as being blank. Nice poetry. Like it

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    1. And that BLANK is often termed as 'dead-like', completely callous or heartless. Thank-you Sir for the appreciation. :)

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  2. Often those seven colours mix so fine in our life, making it white and blank unknowingly!! Nice one dear!

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    1. Yeah! you got it so correct. :-bd
      White imbibes all the seven, so scattering (dispersion) is must to get a rainbow.Happy to see you after a long time. :)

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  3. Nyc poetry.... Keep wrirting... Thanks for visit my blog and commented i am so glad..plz keep visiting...!!!

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  4. Baap re, kya bombastic words use kiya hai...I will have to open a dictionary :O

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  5. To bring out all colors we need a diamond! Lovely poem Surbhi!

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    1. Its always so pleasant to hear from you, Valli!
      You always get the right nerve of the verse. :) :x

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  6. Hey Miss Vivacious Surbhi, this little piece gets huge every time someone reads it. You crafted it brilliantly!!! Keep it coming :) \m/

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    1. Whoohoo :D I love being called Vivacious :x
      Thank-you for such a lovely tail. I'm elated that someone is reading it again and again. 2):)

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    2. Hello Surbhi, Happy Shivratri.
      White on white is equal to white but NO white on white is RAINBOW bright !! great idea !! Great poem . Proud of you grand daughter.

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  7. Waaaoooo :) You quoted such a lovely limerick. :x
    Feeling blessed with your words. 2):)
    Happy Shivratri to you too Granny. :)

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  8. Marvelous---Color perception is a prime for an optics lesson. Have you been a student of Physics??? I liked this very much, dotty! hugz

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    1. Yeah! I love physics :D
      I'm honoured by your lovely appreciation. Hugs back at you. :)

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  9. White has always been magical and mystical hiding all the colors..It just needs a medium to spread them..Likey likey.. :)
    Cheers and smiles

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    1. Thank-you so much Odyzz for the thumbs-up :D
      Yes! White absorbs all the magic. So diamond is the magician here to bring out the splendid panorama. :)

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  10. Beautiful! Bringing the beauty of colors and writing!

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    1. Your presence and words mean a lot. Thanks a ton ma'am. Keep visiting. :)

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  11. A day, Came a thought
    Google have for each needle, a lot

    Let I see, about the Colors
    Google have what multi-colors

    Wandering throughout the Internet
    at last, the blog I met

    For colors, have few words
    Depicting a lot n lot of worlds

    The words, She beautifully garlands
    Mapping the White, on the paper-lands

    http://ravikavisisodia.blogspot.in/
    https://www.facebook.com/SomeWords

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    1. Should I append this??? :-O
      Your poems are always thought provoking instilling emotions at the best. :) Thank-you for this beautiful verse. :)

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  12. You are a finest blogger, Nice work keep posting......... please
    From How they do that

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    1. OH!!! Thanks a ton for this exaggerated appalud. :D
      Your pictures speak better than words. Kudos! :)

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  13. that was beautiful depiction surbhi :) love your name too! lyrical it is and suits you perfectly :)

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    1. Thank-you Maliny Di. I'm glad that you liked my signature. Well! that's what I believe in and follow it, so it suits me. :D

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  14. that was an amazing read!! had to read it a few times to understand completely. will go through your blog archive tonight :)

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    1. It's my pleasure to have you here, DJ, the Gag king. :D
      I'll make sure from the next time that you get the theme in one read. :P

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