Words and Words are all I have......
I couldn't understand what happned there...please explain na.... what is a 'roof flexed back' ?
Haha :D :DI was pretty sure people wont get through this one :D Yayayaa ;)Well!!! I'm a little slow in finding apt words so I put in more of brains to describe "the girl is a ghost with her foot turned back". ( Ulte paer, gotcha!)P.S. I didn't know how to descibe this visualization so used "hoof flexed back". If anyone can please help me with a better description then you are welcome :)
Oh I see. Ya, it's a bit tough to express what you are driving at coz you can't explain it well having just 55 words to play with. What you can do at such times is that you put in an 'Author's Note' towards the end where you can explain your idea. I have done that with my stories 'The first prayer of my life' and '48 hours'. You can refer there.
I could now understand the story. Fine.
Didn't you understand it before?? :(Please tell me an easy way to frame this idea.
hmm... i thought i was the only one who didn't understand about the hoof flexed back.. :P now i found out am not alone ;-)
You can count me too :PI too didn't know this untill I phrased it as 'hoof flexed back' :P :P :PNow it's my patent :D
Thanks for the description....in the comments i was totally out after reading the 55 fiction...i thought whether i am blacked out or my senses aren't working as i couldn't understand a thing...thanks for the description....!!!
Ahh!!! I'm again pleading my dear readers, please please rephrase the whole scene. I would be highly obliged if you can better sum up this 55 fiction. Ideas invited.
I tried but mujhse nahi ho raha.....your 'hoof flexed back' rocks! You should copyright this term :P :D ;)
Haha :DThanks to my brain for getting a copyright term. :PThere will be more of the patents in the coming days. :D
Don't leave before leaving your words here. I will count on your imprints in my blogspace. :)